Friday, November 18, 2011

Flightless aviator?

"they give no notice of the place outside the flow, where the cold bird silently hovers over wild flowers and snow"





what do the following words/phrases metaphorically mean to you?





[a] they


[b] outside the flow


[c] cold bird


[d] silently hovers


[e] wild flowers and snow





it's a verse a made up last week. does it sound angsty to you?

Flightless aviator?
a.) everybody oblivious to your pain


b.) beyond what "they" see


c.) you


d.) live


e.) Eden
Reply:a) outsiders





b) from a dark place





c) non-warm color, like white, or light blue.





d) slow motion. pertrayals of slow motion usually is w/o sound.





e) since flowers are not usally viewable where there is snow,


either:





1 - poking through after an unexpected, uncommon snow fall, therefore - suprise. -or-


2 - representative on non-existence.





Too mellow to be anxious.


Could almost the ether. A transitional place.


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