"they give no notice of the place outside the flow, where the cold bird silently hovers over wild flowers and snow"
what do the following words/phrases metaphorically mean to you?
[a] they
[b] outside the flow
[c] cold bird
[d] silently hovers
[e] wild flowers and snow
it's a verse a made up last week. does it sound angsty to you?
Flightless aviator?
a.) everybody oblivious to your pain
b.) beyond what "they" see
c.) you
d.) live
e.) Eden
Reply:a) outsiders
b) from a dark place
c) non-warm color, like white, or light blue.
d) slow motion. pertrayals of slow motion usually is w/o sound.
e) since flowers are not usally viewable where there is snow,
either:
1 - poking through after an unexpected, uncommon snow fall, therefore - suprise. -or-
2 - representative on non-existence.
Too mellow to be anxious.
Could almost the ether. A transitional place.
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