4. Would any English help me with this? Thanks! Is this correct in English?

Thanks for your help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


[Though Kaiyuan is not outstanding as a tourist city, its name spreads among travelers nationwide because of the rime. The rime on the Lujiang River is one of four natural wonders in China, enjoying equal fame as Guilin Mountains and Streams, Yunnan Stone Forest and the Three Gorges on the Yangtze River do. The rime, also called "snow willow", "tree hanging", "ice flowers", "water vaporized flowers", "silver flowers", is a kind of phenomenon, in which winter fog condenses on the branches and leaves of trees to form separate, white ice crystals, according to metrology.]

4. Would any English help me with this? Thanks! Is this correct in English?
See, now, if I'd seen this portion before I did the other one, I might have done a better job. This one is better to start with, but...





[Though Kaiyuan is not outstanding as a tourist city, its name spreads among travelers nationwide because of the rime. The rime on the Lujiang River is one of four natural wonders in China, enjoying fame equal to that of the Guilin Mountains and Streams, the Yunnan Stone Forest and the Three Gorges on the Yangtze River. The rime, also called "snow willow," "tree hanging," "ice flowers," "water vaporized flowers," and "silver flowers," is a meteorological phenomenon in which winter fog condenses on the branches and leaves of trees to form separate, white ice crystals.]
Reply:Though Kaiyuan itself is not outstanding as a tourist city, its name has spread amongst travelers nationwide because of "The Rime".


The rime on the Lujiang River is one of four natural wonders in China. It enjoys equal fame as the Guilin Mountains and Streams, Yunnan Stone Forest and the Three Gorges on the Yangtze River .


The rime, also called "snow willow", "tree hanging", "ice flowers", "water vaporized flowers", "silver flowers", is a kind of phenomenon, in which winter fog condenses on the branches and leaves of trees to form separate, white ice crystals, according to meteorological sources.
Reply:Einstein corrected!
Reply:The above answer is a much better script, take no notice of mine.

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