Music L♥vers? Help.?

What do you think of my lyrics?





Song Title: It's you again





Last week, I saw you with her


You looked so happy,


I felt so more than sure


that it was over


with me and you





(Hook)


it happened so fast, what could I've done,


the chance I had was none, then you showed up at my door,


I don't want you anymore.





(Chorus)


Doorbell rings, when I answer it, you are there


Your at the door again.


Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,


Candy and flowers in your hand.


It's you again.





I was at the store on Friday afternoon,


I saw you there, thought it was to soon,


Talking 'bout the mistakes we made,


we got together too late





(Chorus)





(Bridge)


It’s not about how long it takes


It’s not about why we broke up


We just need to remember


The good times we had and we’ll


Be together.


If the shoe fits


We’ll never miss.





Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there


Your at the door again.


Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,


Candy and flowers in your hand.


It's you a…


Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there


Your at the door again.


Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,


Candy and flowers in your hand.


It's you again


Again


Again


Again


It’s you again. Oh ooh oh…





Maybe Lovin' you still....

Music L♥vers? Help.?
I personally love the lyrics and would love to hear it sung. Anyone could tell by this that you're a great writer. Do you have any more?
Reply:its really nice. if i could i would download it onto my iPod
Reply:Wow, very nice.
Reply:its excellent!!! i love it like a mini song story!!
Reply:its great go girl u feel the same way i do about music
Reply:no offense, its better thanKelly but this genre has been abused to no end... think about jazz or some crap to write... this bad girl crap gets on ur nerves... p;s u dont have to make me ur best choice but anyhow its a good song, period
Reply:I like it a lot!!
Reply:its cute good job =D
Reply:yeah I can see a future songwriter for pop songs
Reply:I think its a really good song. Your a very good writer. Maybe you should try to publish them somewhere.
Reply:This can work. "Your at the door again." should read "You're at the door again."





You're is short for You are.


Your denotes possession.