What do you think of my song lyrics?

Song Title: It's you again





Last week, I saw you with her


You looked so happy,


i felt so more than sure


that it was over


with me and you





(Hook)


it happened so fast, what could i've done,


the chance i had was none, then you showed up at my door,


i don't want you anymore.





(Chorus)


Doorbell rings, when i answer it, you are there


Your at the door again.


Wind chimes blowing, Outside it's snowing,


Candy and flowers in your hand.


It's you again.





(Bridge)


It's not gonna work this time, no, no(on last no keep it going for at least 5 sec.)





I was at the store on friday afternoon,


I saw you there, thought it was to soon,


Talking 'bout the mistakes we made,


we got together too late





(Hook)





(Chorus)





(Bridge)





Maybe Lovin' you still....





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before you say anything, im "oh snap. london bridge. oh snap." my account was deactivated. so what do you think of them?

What do you think of my song lyrics?
pretty ok could use some fine tuning maybe make it not so literal what genre of music are u writing for ? consider that it may help to liven it up a little give it a little more feeling
Reply:i like it maybe u could become a song writter and publish them
Reply:I like! Their alright
Reply:listen up! u expecting us to tell u how did v like the lyrics without even knowing how d song is actually sung? it's completely impossible to guess! try uploading ur song!!!!
Reply:i'm gonna be blunt here; they're much too cliche and way too unoriginal.
Reply:good