Monday, November 16, 2009

Which one sounds better?

Well, I have this homework and I wonder what opening is better??? Like the one that make you more enterested into season...





1) Why does flower bloom in spring, why does the leaf changes in fall, why is there snow on the ground in winter, and why is it hot when summer...





2) Had you ever wonder of why we have seasons?





3) Or you can help me of thinking of one, I am thinking of one that catches the reader's attention. If you give me some opening, I would so much thank you so much and pick you as the best!





4) My subject is The Reason for the Seasons, so about the seasons...





5) THANK YOU SOME MUCH FOR YOUR HELP!

Which one sounds better?
well, i like 1 the best but the english is a lttle messed up...it should be:


Why do flowers bloom in spring, why do leaves change colors in fall, why is there snow on the ground in winter, and why is it hot in summer
Reply:2
Reply:Go with #1 but read it out loud first... some errors


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