It's you again...?

What do you think of my song lyrics?





Song Title: It's you again





Last week, I saw you with her


You looked so happy,


I felt so more than sure


that it was over


with me and you





(Hook)


it happened so fast, what could I've done,


the chance I had was none, then you showed up at my door,


I don't want you anymore.





(Chorus)


Doorbell rings, when I answer it, you are there


Your at the door again.


Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,


Candy and flowers in your hand.


It's you again.





I was at the store on Friday afternoon,


I saw you there, thought it was to soon,


Talking 'bout the mistakes we made,


we got together too late





(Chorus)





(Bridge)


It’s not about how long it takes


It’s not about why we broke up


We just need to remember


The good times we had and we’ll


Be together.


If the shoe fits


We’ll never miss.





Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there


Your at the door again.


Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,


Candy and flowers in your hand.


It's you a…


Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there


Your at the door again.


Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,


Candy and flowers in your hand.


It's you again


Again


Again


Again


It’s you again. Oh ooh oh…





Maybe Lovin' you still....

It's you again...?
Me personally, I think it would be a pretty good song. I just wish I heard the music to the lyrics. It would definitely sound better to me in my ear if I heard the music, but that is beside the point, you were not asking about that. Your lyrics are good and I think you could be a great song writer.
Reply:it is fine , but have a question:if showed u regretnessand came again , again ,again......ag why u don't give him a chance?


it is simple and nice but i think more rhythm.


well keep going


good luck.
Reply:Very tastefully done. Good Luck ! :)
Reply:yep its me... again!