What do you think of my poem?

The wind's blowing


so hard with its intention


to knock me down,


causing me to sway


so flower like, planting


my feet like a flower's


roots in the Earth.





I sway and sway


so wildly I could


float up and


travel in the wind


like a lonesome seed.





But no matter


how frigid air violently


nibbles at my skin,


no matter how frail


my bones become


from use and abuse,


I will not tumble and fall!





You, wind, will


never make me fall like


snow, melting from


the caress of the warm


breeze, then gone


and forgotten


within the moist


soil.

What do you think of my poem?
I can follow the imagery and it follows through. You personify the wind and I see metaphors for your life. you stand resolute before opposition. finally you address the wind and tame it to your purpose.
Reply:I have absolutely no critisism.


It was amazing!!!


I loved it!


Your saying "No! You will not bring me down!" and it's so bold. I love this poem!


Just jaw dropping! Wonderful!!!
Reply:Oh, this is such a beautiful little poem! Its language is direct, its form is simple, its ideas are straightforward and clear. There is nothing complex here. And that is why this work has such natural elegance and beauty. It is absolutely lovely and I LOVE IT!
Reply:No, not from me. I absolutely love it. It's great.