For ppl who love music...?

What do u think of my song lyrics?





Song Title: It's you again





Last week, I saw you with her


You looked so happy,


I felt so more than sure


that it was over


with me and you





(Hook)


it happened so fast, what could I've done,


the chance I had was none, then you showed up at my door,


I don't want you anymore.





(Chorus)


Doorbell rings, when I answer it, you are there


Your at the door again.


Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,


Candy and flowers in your hand.


It's you again.





I was at the store on Friday afternoon,


I saw you there, thought it was to soon,


Talking 'bout the mistakes we made,


we got together too late





(Chorus)





(Bridge)


It’s not about how long it takes


It’s not about why we broke up


We just need to remember


The good times we had and we’ll


Be together.


If the shoe fits


We’ll never miss.





Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there


Your at the door again.


Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,


Candy and flowers in your hand.


It's you a…


Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there


Your at the door again.


Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,


Candy and flowers in your hand.


It's you again


Again


Again


Again


It’s you again. Oh ooh oh…





Maybe Lovin' you still....

For ppl who love music...?
sounds like u have alot of talent.
Reply:love it.... this great... you are very good song writer, many ppl in the music industry would like your talents. great stuff.
Reply:Totally impressed! Great work.
Reply:Sounds like a Neal Diamond song.
Reply:Hey....pretty good. Seems like its straight from the heart. Keep up ur good work.
Reply:Call me crazy but I think no one can make a good judgement on a song without the music as well. Just reading lyrics is kinda stupid.