What do you think of this poem?

Im in 9th grade and my english teacher said we could write a poem for 15 points extra credit towards our final grade on our report card. She said it could be about anything. So here it is and could you please tell me what you think?








Winters finnally done and over


along with its cold snow and ice


Now spring has come


and it really is quite nice





Its nice, warm and oh so sunny


we go out side to run and play


and thankfully our nose's arent so runny


The flowers bloom and leaves grow back


and everyhting is beautiful and full of life


this all happens very slowly and carefully


and theres absoulutley no sign of animals at strife





Spring showers make rain in the sky


ready to fall at any minute


Nourishment to the seeds in the ground that underlie


we will soon see the meaning of "April showers bring May flowers"


And so we say goodbye to the snow from the sky


and say hello to sunnier skies by the hour





So winters finally done and over


along with its cold snow and ice


Now spring has come


and it really is quite nice

What do you think of this poem?
Wow...





I don't think I've ever read soemthing anything better.





Seriously, try and get that published! =)
Reply:Good effort.
Reply:omg that was a very good poem you should be a poet
Reply:A very good attempt at rhyming, giving the meaning, placing the central idea, and most of all simplicity of words. You shall be a great poet one day.
Reply:i can tell you love spring and that you wrote the poem wit hfealing it has good rythme good rhimes good structure an over all very good poem keep up the good work you got talent
Reply:I liked it
Reply:Woah! WOW! Very great and interesting. I love the way you choose winter and spring in your poem. Very interesting. Awsome! : D
Reply:A very superficial poem for my standards but at nintth grade level that is a guaranteed pass
Reply:Awesome! You'll get extra credit for sure!
Reply:it is a nice poem