Do you think these poems i made are good??

Ok, first tell me how many syllabels they are just for me to make sure and then tell me if they make sense or not...and it would be great if you fix it for me:)





Flowers


With a Decent smell


Planting, budding and growing


Making us feel very cheerful


Elegant





and another one:





Springtime In Vancouver :


Snow falling sideways


Ice bars out of the window


Wind bitterly screams


As winter taunts spring’s first day


Here in the scenic mountains-

Do you think these poems i made are good??
25 syllables in the first one and 27 in the second one. these are really good. nice personification in the second one, too. the first one uses great imagery. i can fell the cheer, almost see and smell the flowers. it's kind of a pick me up poem as well.
Reply:I really like the second one. Your word choice is excellent.
Reply:I really enjoyed both, and on many levels. They show humor, gracefulness, a bouncing rhythm and meter. They are short, but they're fun to read, and I want to read more of your work. Yes, of course they make sense!





Here's the SYLLABLE (note spelling) count:


for "Flowers- 2,5,7,8,3.


for "Springtime" - 6,5,7,5,7,7.


P.S. I'm not sure if you meant for the first lines to be just titles or belonging to the body of the poem. I like the second way better.