What do you think of these poems?

OK, here they are, and, as usual, they do not rhyme:





1: (Alone)





There is a place where I can hide


Deep inside my heart


A place where there are no troubles


No problems or frustrations


I can be me and no one cares


And I can cry and scream


This is the place where I can be


That no one else knows


Sometimes it gets lonely


But I don’t care


For loneliness is safety


I laugh at those who say


Safety is with numbers


For the only true safety


From any form of pain


Is to be utterly


Absolutely


And totally


Alone





2: (The Rose Alone)


The rose alone


In an eggshell world


Doing as it’s told


Freedom a distant illusion


Alone


And yet


Not so


A lone figure


Of fire


Taking her by the hand


Destroying the thorns


And leading her to


A new world


All their own





3: (Darkness)





Stuck in a darkness


Of my own creation


The truth seems too far to touch


The darkness envelopes


And kills all the flowers


And the rose petals


Melt in the snow





Plz tell me what u think!

What do you think of these poems?
loads of feelings , thoughts and emotions and alot of depth


as in following lines:





Deep inside my heart


A place where there are no troubles


No problems or frustrations


I can be me and no one cares


And I can cry and scream
Reply:# 2 I liked. Eggshell world, excellent metaphor.
Reply:i wonder at your being taught to read and "write" at all.


that time could have been put to better use watering the garden


or feeding the cat


shamooing the carpets perhaps.


or putting you to work in the salt mines.

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