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Tell Me What it’s Like Princess








Tell me what it means my friend


To be daughter of a King


Tell me what it’s like my friend


To have a bloodline of Royalty





Do you eat on golden plates my friend


Do you drink from crystal too


Do you have someone that is assigned


Their job is to serve you





Do you dress all up in fancy Gowns


Do you wear a crown of Jewels


Does someone brush your hair for you


Flower petals dance across your Pool





Is your bed dressed up in Satin


Is your pillow dressed in Silk


Is your table set for Tea Time


Even when you just sit down for a glass of milk





Do your servants


Say yes, your highness


Or no your majesty


Do you dine with Politicians


Sit down with Celebrities for Tea








Do you stare out of your window


Overlooking a garden of Elegant Beauty


Do sit out by the Ocean


Whilst someone fans you with Giant Leaves





Are you smarter than the average girl


Do you attend the finest schools


Do you have a soft angelic voice


Did your Prince claim you through a Duel





Is your hair as soft as silk, my friend


Is your skin perfect, without flaw


Do you dance among the trees Princess


Do others stand and look at you in awe





“Why, No You’ve got it wrong my friend


Exclaimed the Princess of Royalty


You seem to have it all mixed up


It’s my Lord the Prince of Peace


You see I am just like you my friend


When I awake my hairs a mess


I eat from cheapo plastic


My Mom made me this dress





My room is nothing fancy


I own nothing made of silk


And I sometimes stand at the counter


Dipping Oreos in Milk





I do not have a pool my friend


Never been fanned with Giant leaves


I do not have an Elegant Garden


But yes I dance among the trees





I dance because, He loves Me


I dance because he died for me


I dance for He gave his very life


Did this to set me Free





He’s forgiven me of all my sins


He has washed me pure as snow


He’s preparing now a mansion for me


In Heaven where I’ll call home





He’s taken away deep scars and pain


He cleaned out anger from my past


His filled my heart with hope and love


A love that will forever last





You see I’m not just daughter of some ol’ random King


I do not have a servant but yes I’m royalty


I’m Daughter of the most high God


Some call Him King of Kings


I’m daughter of the most High God


I call him now Daddy





And this you may find shocking


But you, are royalty


His blood was shed there on that cross


He died to set you free








So close your eyes, imagine


A mansion on a hill


Now feel His arms around you


Your heart He longs to Heal





He longs to set you free my friend


To call your Princess and Daughter


He longs to fill your heart with love


To make you a spotless Dove





His love is everlasting


His arms stronger than the world


You were put here to be His Princess


Not some ol’ random Girl





So arm yourself with truth my friend


Grab His Sword the Word and Fight


Give Your heart to Him my Friends


Become Royalty Tonight





Christie Cole…July 2007

Opinions on a Poem?
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! %26lt;3 KEEP WRITING GRL!
Reply:It's quite long.


%26lt;to make you a spotless Dove...%26gt;hummmmmmm let's see:


Dove





my silence sings/mon silence chante, my love sprout


wings/mon amour bourgeonné d'ailes, became the


sun/devint le soleil %26amp; flew into a fuse/s'envola et se


fondit/ because my blood is fire/parce que mon sang


est feu/ the guff is empty/le trompie est vide, my


tears became the rain/mes larmes se transformèrent en


pluie, my thoughts the air/mes pensées en air,


dissolved in earth/dissoutes-dans la terre, still


rooted there/encore enracinées là , my simple


fears/mes simples peurs, turned into the


thorns/devinrent des épines brodées , the


bougainvillea climbs/la bougainville monte , a trellis


to this solitude/un treillis vers cette solitude, my


legacy a drafty garret/mon héritage: un grenier à


courrants d âir, my laughter all became the


clouds/tout mon rire devint les nuages , my need


changed from stars/mon besoin changea les étoiles ,


into some angry cup of ashes/dans une tasse de


cendres fâchées , %26amp; my smile became a coffin


shroud/mon sourire se convertit en un drap de cerceuil


, my questions all the answers/mes questions: toutes


les réponsemy silence sings/mon silence chante, my


love sprout wings/mon amour bourgeonné d'ailes, became


the sun/devint le soleil %26amp; flew into a fuse/s'envola


et se fondit/ because my blood is fire/parce que mon


sang est feu/ the guff is empty/le trompie est vide,


my tears became the rain/mes larmes se transformèrent


en pluie, my thoughts the air/mes pensées en air,


dissolved in earth/dissoutes-dans la terre, still


rooted there/encore enracinées là , my simple


fears/mes simples peurs, turned into the


thorns/devinrent des épines brodées , the


bougainvillea climbs/la bougainville monte , a trellis


to this solitude/un treillis vers cette solitude, my


legacy a drafty garret/mon héritage: un grenier à


courrants d âir, my laughter all became the


clouds/tout mon rire devint les nuages , my need


changed from stars/mon besoin changea les étoiles ,


into some angry cup of ashes/dans une tasse de


cendres fâchées , %26amp; my smile became a coffin


shroud/mon sourire se convertit en un drap de cerceuil


, my questions all the answers/mes questions: toutes


les réponse


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Reply:i love it
Reply:so loooooonggg
Reply:i love it. you are very talented