Ok let me know what you think about this poem, like it or not?

A cool blue ocean, a crimson dawn or a blessing from above,


I would sacrifice it all to let you know m y love





A passion flower in the spring, and a brightly burning star,


When I look past it all, standing, there you are.





More than just a hope, so much greater than a dream,


You give me courage that I lack, and undoubted self esteem.





Have you seen a rainbow on a snow tipped peak?


You are so much more graceful and so greatly more unique.





The gentlest of creatures, in a forest capped with green,


But still you are, by far, the greatest IV ever seen!





And if all the beauty’s in the world were to slowly disappear,


No sadness and no loneliness would I feel, if you I could have near.





You give me strength, you give me hope, my heart you keep burning bright,


I long for your calming touch, to get me through the night.





Would you take my hand if all this I could give?


I pry you would, for without you I could not live.

Ok let me know what you think about this poem, like it or not?
Is this dedicated to someone?





Well if u r planning to read it to someone, i am sure that person will love it!I think u r really good and maybe a bit romantic too?!
Reply:okay i am not the one for Ode's ........ yeah it's not bad..i came for 2 points but i am pleased now
Reply:I thought it was very beautiful. There is alot of emotion in it. I would love to have someone give me such a poem. Thanks, that made me smile.
Reply:thank you! you have a talent...what a wonderful poem...thumbs up. you should give your poetry to ppl or to magazines or something. you'd make someone's day.
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Reply:found a typo! but never mind that. this is at best, pedantic and unrelenting ( that's a complement). and your rhyming skills are unmatched (rhyming every other line gets very boring though)


try something shorter, like this:





i


i am


i





you


are you


you?








(yes, the spacing matters)
Reply:Yes, I will marry you.
Reply:YOUR POEM IS VERY NICE, FULL OF LOVE AND ROMANCE.


SORRY ABOUT THE SAD ENDING... TOMORROW IS ANOTHER DAY AND THE BEST IS YET TO COME.
Reply:VERY COOL!! I liked it very much,..it was awsome,..I wonder what kind a person r u if u wrote it,..aahh,..sorry,u'r not a person u'r a miracle!!!! I think all wanna feel in that way the truly love,..and be happy..